EDM Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 I'm sending BOTH versions to the next one; my Smiley Bro is a GENIUS!!! :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
akaslickster Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 I think it should be 1 post each to avoid any misconceptions. I am sending only 1. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
akaslickster Posted July 9, 2012 Report Share Posted July 9, 2012 Sent to Miki. I passed the poem too but did not translate it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panther Posted July 9, 2012 Report Share Posted July 9, 2012 Sorry, no quotes - Cheers Thal :lol: Hehehe *High-fives EDM* That's alright Slick, I only meant for one to be sent anyway EDM what did you change? The poem, the sentence or both? (or none ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panther Posted July 9, 2012 Report Share Posted July 9, 2012 Sorry, no quotes - Cheers Thal :lol: Hehehe *High-fives EDM* That's alright Slick, I only meant for one to be sent anyway EDM what did you change? The poem, the sentence or both? (or none ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissKitten Posted July 9, 2012 Report Share Posted July 9, 2012 I'll prob change the poem and send it on. If that's alright with you guys. Or I could do both? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissKitten Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 Nvm, just doing the sentence. The poem's too complicated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brainiac100 Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 Alright. Here we go! As I postpone the inevitable, with hail surrounding me, I see and embrace a brightening beverage that, realistically, looks disgusting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thalia Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 (edited) FLAME!!! PANTHER!!! WHAT THE H*** DID YOU DO?!?!?! Edited July 10, 2012 by Thalia Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thalia Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 Chocolate is a serious thing. As I postpone the inevitable, with hail surrounding me, I see and embrace a brightening beverage that, realistically, looks disgusting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissKitten Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 Chocolate is a serious thing. During my time, surrounded by the tundras tears, I see a pretty nice beverage of cider that actually is unpleasant to watch. While I wait, as dry icy droplets are around me, I view a welcome and cheery drink that, in reality, is distasteful to look at continuously. As I postpone the inevitable, with hail surrounding me, I see and embrace a brightening beverage that, realistically, looks disgusting. *laughs hysterically* But....I will take some of the blame, as when I was messing with the phrase, I made a lot of weird connections. I.e., cider as a warm and cheery drink, because for some reason, I associate it with happiness. O.o And "during my time" became "while I wait"..... I don't even know how...... :wacko: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brainiac100 Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 Whoa. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panther Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 (edited) Chocolate is a serious thing. something that is good to drink in snow minus the temperature is a very grave item. When surrounded by winter's tears, a cool glass of cider - that which would usually please the eye - is, in fact, a rather unwelcome sight. When strewn amongst winter's tears One of men's most greatest fears It leaves them knocking at their knees The terror that... their beer will freeze! During my time, surrounded by the tundras tears, I see a pretty nice beverage of cider that actually is unpleasant to watch. While I wait, as dry icy droplets are around me, I view a welcome and cheery drink that, in reality, is distasteful to look at continuously. As I postpone the inevitable, with hail surrounding me, I see and embrace a brightening beverage that, realistically, looks disgusting. Eh... wow... what the hell did Flame do!! :lol: I don't know what EDM and Slick sent on from me, so i've included my poem as well as my sentence Edited July 10, 2012 by Panther Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brainiac100 Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 Hahaha wow! That poem was awesome!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EDM Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 Chocolate is a serious thing. something that is good to drink in snow minus the temperature is a very grave item. When surrounded by winter's tears, a cool glass of cider - that which would usually please the eye - is, in fact, a rather unwelcome sight. When strewn amongst winter's tears One of men's most greatest fears It leaves them knocking at their knees The terror that... their beer will freeze! When enclosed by cold weather's drops of salty water from the eyes, an awesome mirror of apple vinegar - a pretty one - is actually unpleasant to look at. When gently thrown along cold weather's drops of salty water from the eyes One of Homo sapien's awesomest mild phobias It ditches to let them tapping at the part after the thigh bone The horror that... their mild booze will turn into ice!!! During my time, surrounded by the tundras tears, I see a pretty nice beverage of cider that actually is unpleasant to watch. While I wait, as dry icy droplets are around me, I view a welcome and cheery drink that, in reality, is distasteful to look at continuously. As I postpone the inevitable, with hail surrounding me, I see and embrace a brightening beverage that, realistically, looks disgusting. I made chutney out of Panther's poem... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panther Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 Hahaha wow! That poem was awesome!!! Thanks man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
akaslickster Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 Chocolate is a serious thing. something that is good to drink in snow minus the temperature is a very grave item. When surrounded by winter's tears, a cool glass of cider - that which would usually please the eye - is, in fact, a rather unwelcome sight. When strewn amongst winter's tears One of men's most greatest fears It leaves them knocking at their knees The terror that... their beer will freeze! When enclosed by cold weather's drops of salty water from the eyes, an awesome mirror of apple vinegar - a pretty one - is actually unpleasant to look at. When gently thrown along cold weather's drops of salty water from the eyes One of Homo sapien's awesomest mild phobias It ditches to let them tapping at the part after the thigh bone The horror that... their mild booze will turn into ice!!! During my time, surrounded by the tundras tears, I see a pretty nice beverage of cider that actually is unpleasant to watch. While I wait, as dry icy droplets are around me, I view a welcome and cheery drink that, in reality, is distasteful to look at continuously. As I postpone the inevitable, with hail surrounding me, I see and embrace a brightening beverage that, realistically, looks disgusting. I made chutney out of Panther's poem... NVM, someone inserted mine. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikeD Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 Chocolate is a serious thing. something that is good to drink in snow minus the temperature is a very grave item. When surrounded by winter's tears, a cool glass of cider - that which would usually please the eye - is, in fact, a rather unwelcome sight. When strewn amongst winter's tears One of men's most greatest fears It leaves them knocking at their knees The terror that... their beer will freeze! When enclosed by cold weather's drops of salty water from the eyes, an awesome mirror of apple vinegar - a pretty one - is actually unpleasant to look at. When gently thrown along cold weather's drops of salty water from the eyes One of Homo sapien's awesomest mild phobias It ditches to let them tapping at the part after the thigh bone The horror that... their mild booze will turn into ice!!! Whilst encircled by icy climate’s droplets of brine out of eyes, a wonderful looking glass of cider – a beautiful single – is in reality disagreeable to view. Whilst mildly tossed by icy climate's droplets of brineout of the eyes. Single of Human's wonderfulness slight fears It channels to let them drumming at the portion after the thigh bone The dismay that... their slight booze will freeze During my time, surrounded by the tundras tears, I see a pretty nice beverage of cider that actually is unpleasant to watch. While I wait, as dry icy droplets are around me, I view a welcome and cheery drink that, in reality, is distasteful to look at continuously. As I postpone the inevitable, with hail surrounding me, I see and embrace a brightening beverage that, realistically, looks disgusting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brainiac100 Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 That was an odd twist. 1. 2. 3. Brainiac100 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikeD Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 That was an odd twist. 1. 2. 3. Brainiac100 4. 5. MikeD 7. 6. 8. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thalia Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 (edited) 1. 2. 3. Brainiac100 4. Thal 5. MikeD 6. 7. 8. @Panther- I agree with Brainy. That was a great poem. Edited July 10, 2012 by Thalia Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissKitten Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 Sitting this round out. Sorry, guys. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
akaslickster Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 1. 2. Slick 3. Brainiac100 4. Thal 5. MikeD 6. 7. 8. So, who will be 1st? I guess give it a day. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panther Posted July 11, 2012 Report Share Posted July 11, 2012 1. Panther 2. Slick 3. Brainiac100 4. Thal 5. MikeD 6. 7. I'll give it a shot at first I don't suppose anyone can fix my colour for me? It feels wrong without it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panther Posted July 11, 2012 Report Share Posted July 11, 2012 Should I start yet? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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