[Guest]

This is for people to write any poems or short stories that they can think of. The only limitation is your mind (and the rules of Brainden). Nothing inapropriate and no swears. People are encouraged to give constructive critisism to stories and poems that are posted here. Also you have to post original work, nothing that has already been written (der). Have fun :) .

Edited June 12, 2008 by giterdone

[Guest]

Thuchris, are you picking on SillouhetteMind? <_<

No.

I don't care if it's not.

I like the poem

Just wondering

[Guest]

here is a haiku

that stands out from all others

by meaning nothing

but if you want to write another style,

just put some stanzas down (but nothing vile!)

when read aloud a cadence you will find

within these words i pulled from my behind.

(iambic pentameter)

[akaslickster]

No.

I don't care if it's not.

I like the poem

Just wondering

Yes, because it uses 2 claps, unlike ice with just one. Don't ask why.

[Guest]

Yes, because it uses 2 claps, unlike ice with just one. Don't ask why.

see..

I still use the clap thing too HA! HA! HA!

Edited June 26, 2008 by Thuhchris

[Guest]

HAIKU

Today is the day.

There may be no tomorrow.

It's now or never.

[Guest]

HAIKU

Today is the day.

There may be no tomorrow.

It's now or never.

I like the feeling that it gives...action!! Short, but intense! Great job!!

[akaslickster]

HAIKU

Today is the day.

There may be no tomorrow.

It's now or never.

Forever.....will be too late..... its now or never.............my love won't wait? Elvis?

[Guest]

I have a beging of a stoy never finished...............Because this is a true story

'Wake up Pamela! Time to get ready for school.' That is what I wanted to hear. Ever since school let out I just couldn't wait to go back. I would finally be going to the Middle School, but it is still July 12 not anywhere near time. I got up to brush my teeth. The tube was empty. "Grandama we dont have any more tooth paste"

That is just the begiing most of it is true but later on it starts getting interseting the fake part but still posible if you want me to continue the story just say so

Edited July 12, 2008 by sagekid

[Guest]

Here is some more while i can think of it ..........

Nothing she must me making breakfast.I walked up the stairs to see if she was in the kichen.Yup she was making herself some coffee

Edited July 12, 2008 by sagekid

[Guest]

There i am sitting

across the great dark valley

not a soul but me

Just thought of it and thought i would put it on here does any one under stand or know what it means

[Guest]

A Sad peom

Who will come save me

all alone in this dark world

Nothing left to do but cry

It is abit rough

[Guest]

Depresion

By Pamela

Alone and afraid

Where do i got wat to do

oh what do i do

[grey cells]

You know sagekid , your writing reminds me of my little sister when she was your age . She's 16 now . But she didn't write poems , but still your writing is strikingly similar . Hey ! do you watch cartoons . I love cartoons , eventhough I am 20 now . You must definitely watch lot more cartoons , if you already don't .

[Guest]

Grandma I said we need more tooth past. Well replyed grandma i cant go to the store for my back is in too much. Uh I was going to the pool with my best friend and i was not going to be albe to brush my teeth.

[Guest]

Sorry for all the sad poems here are some happy ones

Shine does the sun light

All on my face does it shine

No more darkness here

[peace*out]

I drift along a path of sorrow

not caring about today or tomorrow

and there is a stinging mist

that slides along, that slowly drifts

This is my sadness that i see

Is suspended in front of me

A light white small - blue tint

and then the suprising coldness hits

It's just like me, the rainy tears

That i cry throughout my years

I go to the side of of the path

and let go by the icy wrath

I know i need to let it go

And yet i want to chase it so

Becuase it is a part of me

It is what people see

I cannot stop the sad

until i get rid of the bad

So to my friends please help me now

Ill help you later when there's a cry of "Yow!"

By Jenny

(I just cranked this out in 5 minutes, so tell me what's bad)

[Izzy]

FOR THOSE ABOUT TO ROCK, WE SALUTE YOU! \m/(0.0)\m/!!!

Enough said.

[Guest]

I just made this up so....

The stinging, the fire in my eye,

Slowing forcing me to die.

Raptured by water of the spirit,

I gave my soul one good merrit.

For this liquid that clenses the heart,

It can invoke suffering from the start.

A symbol of woe and pitty within,

Yet relieving my mind and body of sin.

I am sure most of you relize what the poem is talking about. I just threw this together so feel free to criticize

[peace*out]

I just made this up so....

The stinging, the fire in my eye,

Slowing forcing me to die.

Raptured by water of the spirit,

I gave my soul one good merrit.

For this liquid that clenses the heart,

It can invoke suffering from the start.

A symbol of woe and pitty within,

Yet relieving my mind and body of sin.

I am sure most of you relize what the poem is talking about. I just threw this together so feel free to criticize

i dont - is that bad??

[andromeda]

Since I am writing poetry it's time to contribute!

Make a Wish

Danube is flowing peacefully

Unbroken by waves

Time is stealing

My hearts every beating

Expired breath never to retrieve

I need faith and

A midnight sky sprinkled

With falling stars

Make a wish

To impede time

Ice statues are melting

Beauty is dying

And the first few rays of sunshine

Somewhere above the cloud

Come as a warning

Frozen tears

Sparkle on my cheek

Frost on my eye-lashes

Behind them

Two dark brown eyes

Chasms containing fire inside

There’s so much life deep within us

Imprisoned birds

On the brink of extinction.

[peace*out]

Thats so p-pretty!!! :'( Im crying!! :'(

[andromeda]

Thats so p-pretty!!! :'( Im crying!! :'(

Thanks and it's not about death! This poem is about people waiting for something to happen instead just doing something about it.

Heartbeat, expired breath, ice statues melting all of those things are just manifestations of time passing by.

[peace*out]

Thanks and it's not about death! This poem is about people waiting for something to happen instead just doing something about it.

Heartbeat, expired breath, ice statues melting all of those things are just manifestations of time passing by.

Mine's how depressed i always feel. but not on BD. The thing with be and poetry is i can crank out a poem in 5 minutes, and people say its good - or great for that matter.

So - feedback on mine??

[andromeda]

Since you liked the previous one here are couple more... (Mind that these are translated from Serbian and they probably sound better in my language, oh and one more thing I don't tend to rhyme!)

*Untitled*

I will steal

One moment from eternity

Share it with you

And keep it away from forgetting

In a photograph or a painting

In a jewelry box

Or I’ll invent a counting rhyme

With yours and mine name in it

Maybe in a fairytale about a prince

And a girl pretending to be

His faithful servant

I’ll freeze it over with

The first cold breath of November

And keep it in a crystal ice grid

Away from sunlight

So it could never melt

So I could never lose

That one moment

That made my whole life

Worth living

*Untitled*

If only you could

Become a wind

So I could see your face

So I could gaze at your eyes

And only sometimes

Touch my arms

And only sometimes

Knock on my doors

If only I could

Become a pollen

To be from flowers

By you stolen

To be summoned

At touch of skin

To spread my wings

And cover your pores

With butterfly kisses

If only you could

Become a cloud

So you could shelter the sun

So you could shelter the moon

And only sometimes

Weep in silence

And only sometimes

Land on my window-pane

If only I could

Collect enough strength

To sink to the bottom

Of my soul

With my open arms

At touch of snow

To embrace the sky

And provide your tears

With a safehold.

[peace*out]

pretty, pretty, pretty.....