deannaart Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 The Sun and Moon Rise and fall Doing their little dance Each day at dawn And at sunset They steal a little glance The moon brings gifts Of the tides And all the stars above The Sun brings life to plants and trees And all the crops we love Then closer they come Till at last They're standing back to back Finally, turning around They face each other Eclipse! as they're shrouded in black Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 maybe parents.. but it doesnt fit... i'm thinking of a long distance relationshipThe Sun and Moon Rise and fall Doing their little dance Each day at dawn And at sunset They steal a little glance The moon brings gifts Of the tides And all the stars above The Sun brings life to plants and trees And all the crops we love Then closer they come Till at last They're standing back to back Finally, turning around They face each other Eclipse! as they're shrouded in black Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 maybe parents.. but it doesnt fit... i'm thinking of a long distance relationship You're sort of on the right track with the second answer, but still, no Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 plainglazed Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 I dont get it. Starting with the parenthetical "easy" in the title. "two ships passing at night" OK, will keep studying. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 I dont get it. Starting with the parenthetical "easy" in the title. "two ships passing at night" OK, will keep studying. Maybe we just think too differently... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 The Sun and Moon Rise and fall Doing their little dance Each day at dawn And at sunset They steal a little glance The moon brings gifts Of the tides And all the stars above The Sun brings life to plants and trees And all the crops we love Then closer they come Till at last They're standing back to back Finally, turning around They face each other Eclipse! as they're shrouded in blackSong... you know... Strangers in the night... Exchanging glances... Buh Buh Buh Buh Buh... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 plainglazed Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 Song... you know... Strangers in the night... Exchanging glances... Buh Buh Buh Buh Buh... That was cruel. Heyupal, you play for keeps! This will be with me for hours and my head is already swimming. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 That was cruel. Heyupal, you play for keeps! This will be with me for hours and my head is already swimming. OMG!! I'm almost actually ROTFLOL!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 Song... you know... Strangers in the night... Exchanging glances... Buh Buh Buh Buh Buh... That's so funny!!! Kind of in the right direction.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 OMG!! I'm almost actually ROTFLOL!!!! Why do I feel like I'm the butt of a joke that I don't get? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 Why do I feel like I'm the butt of a joke that I don't get? Uhh.... Cause you're not! I was laughing because I'm pretty sure I stuck a song in PG's head I would never make you end of a joke, BUTT or otherwise! And for the record I think this poem is beautifully written! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 tiger_lily111 Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 At least if you have the Sinatra version in your head, not so bad. unattainable or fleeting Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 (edited) Uhh.... I don't know...Cause you're not! I was laughing because I'm pretty sure I stuck a song in PG's head I would never make you the end of a joke, BUTT or otherwise! And for the record I think this poem is beautifully written! Edited quote above....brainz to figners not working lately! And I had to edit this too.....twice! Edited May 17, 2009 by heyupal Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 At least if you have the Sinatra version in your head, not so bad. unattainable or fleetingNo, sorry. If you look at the end of the riddle, the moon and sun do meet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 Edited quote above....brainz to figners not working lately! And I had to edit this too.....twice! You're Always editing! Like figners? Thanx for saying you like it. It's obvisouly not written well enough, since it's not seeming to convey my idea... I thought the moon and sun metaphor was so obvious that I shouldn't overload he riddle, but i think I'm going to have to add some lines or something... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 You're Always editing! Like figners? Thanx for saying you like it. It's obvisouly not written well enough, since it's not seeming to convey my idea... I thought the moon and sun metaphor was so obvious that I shouldn't overload he riddle, but i think I'm going to have to add some lines or something... Like figners.... Is it a blind date? Or am I heading in the wrong direction? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 Like figners.... Is it a blind date? Or am I heading in the wrong direction? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 17, 2009 Report Share Posted May 17, 2009 You're Always editing! Like figners? Thanx for saying you like it. It's obvisouly not written well enough, since it's not seeming to convey my idea... I thought the moon and sun metaphor was so obvious that I shouldn't overload he riddle, but i think I'm going to have to add some lines or something... ts it to do withopposites attract? shrouded in black? romeo and juliet? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 ATTENTION ALL: I DEEPLY APOLOGIZE FOR DISAPPEARING ON YOU!!!!!!I suddenly got VERY sick. This happens from time to time as some of you might have noticed. I am here now and will be answering all your answers as promptly as possible. Thanx, and happy riddling!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Like figners.... Is it a blind date? Or am I heading in the wrong direction? No, you are in the right direction.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Like figners.... Is it a blind date? Or am I heading in the wrong direction? marriage And what are married people called before they're married? (non virgin) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 ts it to do withopposites attract? shrouded in black? romeo and juliet? What would you call Romeo and Juliet? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 What would you call Romeo and Juliet? doomed lovers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 doomed lovers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 was i right or wrong? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 (edited) Yes, but lovers What are they doing? Edited May 18, 2009 by deannaart Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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The Sun and Moon
Rise and fall
Doing their little dance
Each day at dawn
And at sunset
They steal a little glance
The moon brings gifts
Of the tides
And all the stars above
The Sun brings life
to plants and trees
And all the crops we love
Then closer they come
Till at last
They're standing back to back
Finally, turning around
They face each other
Eclipse! as they're shrouded in black
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