[akaslickster]

Hi, everyone. I am sure alot have already played the game "Poe Umm II" , well this is nearly the same except you may write up to 10 lines per poem.

The describers are allowed to use 1 or 2 but no more than three words for their turn. Please post message the person that you are passing to, and as usual, please use spoilers. The first on the list will create a poem and second one will describe it and so on down the list. I will give a day or so for the sign-up time that starts below this:

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[Guest]

New caption coming up! Don't worry, it's easier

toddler criminal (ok, I lied

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Good luck, Riranor!

[Guest]

New caption coming up! Don't worry, it's easier

toddler criminal (ok, I lied

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Good luck, Riranor!

i will start shortly

[Guest]

New caption coming up! Don't worry, it's easier

toddler criminal (ok, I lied

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Good luck, Riranor!

Whoops sorry guys won't read it this time

[Guest]

everyone i was busy today and didnt get to right it after i am done with some Homework i will get started

[Guest]

It's not that good but my bro thought it was funny so might as well go with it

ST (only joking

but it would probably match if i turned it to a poem... but here is the real one

Spoiler for real one:

What do we do

there is a killer on the loose

We all run

we all hide

From a fate we can’t deny

He is short and hard to see

As he is young and can’t be beat

And an expert of hide and seek

So he will surely find me

And make me mince meat!

[Guest]

Chained to fate

[Guest]

Chained to fate

WOW! i wouldnt have thought of that

[Guest]

WOW! i wouldnt have thought of that

Isn't that the point?

Nice Poem RMZ!

[andromeda]

Thank you Riranor and RMZ I PM-ed peace

1. andromeda

Underneath the snow,

Hidden promise of a spring,

Hidden promise of daisies and

Violets and unknown shapes

Of my feelings towards you.

Unknown color of your eyes,

Hidden promise of your words

Unspoken... my heart is frozen,

But It'll never break.

2. Crazypainter

"Love Letter Lost"

3. woon

Where are all the papers?

I swear I keep all in the drawer!

All the moon and stars he promised

And the envelopes sealed with a kiss.

How many nights they accompany me

To make my dream as sweat as it can be

Don’t tell me grandma thought they are rubbish

Throw them to the dustbin and all gone vanished!

4. RainThinker

Badly-written Valentines

5. Grayven

Hey sweetcakes, lend me your ear,

So I can compliment you on your sweet posterior!

You got big beautiful eyes, like a kitten on crack.

Of all space and time, you make me lose track!

Be mine, be mine, you gorgeous dame.

If only to put an end to this rhyme which is lame.

I'm serious, I'm certain, I cannot be stopped!

Unless you answer the question about to be popped!

Would you, could you, for the rest of all time?

Oh, won't you please be my Valentine?!?!

6. akaslickster

Corny proposal

7. IDoNotExist

To normal traditions he had not adhered

There were other ideas that he had perused

"This just goes to show why I've 'come so endeared

It's crazy, I know, but I'm oh so amused!"

"Awkward but lovely, all he had planned.

That look and that smile, oh it was grand!"

To outsiders, strange and quite a bit weird

"He did what?!" They reply, very confused

"Oh Yes! It was great!" The bride to be cheered

"Sure's not to me", the outsiders mused

"That's what makes it special, you don't understand"

"I'm quite ecstatic to call him my man!"

8. lemonymelon

Maverick

9. Twin Pop

Top gun.

six shooter.

No slow brain for me.

Black hat, baby! Hero's not my name!

Brandless.

Motherless.

No milk for me.

No cry, baby! Now at least I'm free!

POW.

GOP.

No maison blanche for me.

Moderation, baby! I won't play your game!

Loner.

Rebel.

No conformity for me.

Out of the box, baby! How I need to be!

10. star_tiger

French Mafia

Toddler criminal

11. Riranor

What do we do

there is a killer on the loose

We all run

we all hide

From a fate we can’t deny

He is short and hard to see

As he is young and can’t be beat

And an expert of hide and seek

So he will surely find me

And make me mince meat!

12. RMZ

Chained to fate

Where we are at the moment:

1. andromeda

2. crazypainter

3. woon

4. Rainthinker

5. Grayven

6. akaslickster

7. IDNE

8. lemonymelon

9. Twin Pop

10. star tiger

11. Riranor

12. RMZ

13. Peace

I'm not hosting again!

[peace*out]

may i just say my poem without a spoiler, or...

oh well, here it is...

it doesn't matter

win or lose

this simple face

shall destiny choose

It's not a choice

you or i can make

its not in your power

its up to fate

i have slumdog millionare on the brain...

[andromeda]

Thank you all for playing!

1. andromeda

Underneath the snow,

Hidden promise of a spring,

Hidden promise of daisies and

Violets and unknown shapes

Of my feelings towards you.

Unknown color of your eyes,

Hidden promise of your words

Unspoken... my heart is frozen,

But It'll never break.

2. Crazypainter

"Love Letter Lost"

3. woon

Where are all the papers?

I swear I keep all in the drawer!

All the moon and stars he promised

And the envelopes sealed with a kiss.

How many nights they accompany me

To make my dream as sweat as it can be

Don’t tell me grandma thought they are rubbish

Throw them to the dustbin and all gone vanished!

4. RainThinker

Badly-written Valentines

5. Grayven

Hey sweetcakes, lend me your ear,

So I can compliment you on your sweet posterior!

You got big beautiful eyes, like a kitten on crack.

Of all space and time, you make me lose track!

Be mine, be mine, you gorgeous dame.

If only to put an end to this rhyme which is lame.

I'm serious, I'm certain, I cannot be stopped!

Unless you answer the question about to be popped!

Would you, could you, for the rest of all time?

Oh, won't you please be my Valentine?!?!

6. akaslickster

Corny proposal

7. IDoNotExist

To normal traditions he had not adhered

There were other ideas that he had perused

"This just goes to show why I've 'come so endeared

It's crazy, I know, but I'm oh so amused!"

"Awkward but lovely, all he had planned.

That look and that smile, oh it was grand!"

To outsiders, strange and quite a bit weird

"He did what?!" They reply, very confused

"Oh Yes! It was great!" The bride to be cheered

"Sure's not to me", the outsiders mused

"That's what makes it special, you don't understand"

"I'm quite ecstatic to call him my man!"

8. lemonymelon

Maverick

9. Twin Pop

Top gun.

six shooter.

No slow brain for me.

Black hat, baby! Hero's not my name!

Brandless.

Motherless.

No milk for me.

No cry, baby! Now at least I'm free!

POW.

GOP.

No maison blanche for me.

Moderation, baby! I won't play your game!

Loner.

Rebel.

No conformity for me.

Out of the box, baby! How I need to be!

10. star_tiger

French Mafia

Toddler criminal

11. Riranor

What do we do

there is a killer on the loose

We all run

we all hide

From a fate we can’t deny

He is short and hard to see

As he is young and can’t be beat

And an expert of hide and seek

So he will surely find me

And make me mince meat!

12. RMZ

Chained to fate

13. peace*out

it doesn't matter

win or lose

this simple face

shall destiny choose

It's not a choice

you or i can make

its not in your power

its up to fate

Where we are at the moment:

1. andromeda

2. crazypainter

3. woon

4. Rainthinker

5. Grayven

6. akaslickster

7. IDNE

8. lemonymelon

9. Twin Pop

10. star tiger

11. Riranor

12. RMZ

13. Peace

I'm not hosting again!

Edited February 26, 2009 by andromeda

[Guest]

aw thanks for great poems and captions everyone, and a big thanks to Andromeda and everyone who helped organise it

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Isn't that the point?

Nice Poem RMZ!

Why thank you

[akaslickster]

Great job everyone. Here we go again! Newbies are encouraged to try. I will only need help with the updating part. I'll go first with a poem, after a sufficient amount of sign-ups. Woot-Woot!

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slick, I am leaving for a w/e vacation in the am. I hope you dont pass me over..so please if the list is filled up by sunday eve could you put me lower onthe list?

[akaslickster]

slick, I am leaving for a w/e vacation in the am. I hope you dont pass me over..so please if the list is filled up by sunday eve could you put me lower onthe list?

No problem. I will make arrangements as needed because no one likes to wait too long.

Hopefully we can get this going. Time to sign up people who are interested. I will start after 10 or more sign-ups.

[Guest]

Odds caption and evens write, right?

[akaslickster]

Odds caption and evens write, right?

Odd numbered create a poem and even numbered peeps up to 3 words not more. Good question.

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Not exacltly sure what this is but I like poetry so I will sign up. Will someone explain it to me please?

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Welcome CSG, you can check in this post from the page 1 onwards about how the game play.

[akaslickster]

OKAY. Now we're rockin', and I will try and pm the other players and start with my best poem ever! Enjoy Folks.

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[akaslickster]

Without any further ado, I think that it is time to start this shindig.

My beginning poem:

There I see in the night,

so bold and so large

So many people walk up to me

to ask just, what it is.

I dream and I cry over the beauty of it.

People need not to ask why this is so real

They finally see, exactly as me.

Can someone tell just what I love?

I should not disguise this moment of passion

for it is within ones own eyes, that may only see.

No one except craz