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Hi, everyone. I am sure alot have already played the game "Poe Umm II" , well this is nearly the same except you may write up to 10 lines per poem.

The describers are allowed to use 1 or 2 but no more than three words for their turn. Please post message the person that you are passing to, and as usual, please use spoilers. The first on the list will create a poem and second one will describe it and so on down the list. I will give a day or so for the sign-up time that starts below this:

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Hey Riranor , I would like if you could give me a description, please. That will enable me to take my turn, while creating a great poem for all to enjoy.

Rir already wrote a description way back, and then Peace did. I guess you could choose one of them to write a poem to :P

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If I may assist here. We are currently on Peace who needs to write a poem from Riranor's description. I have posted Riranor's description below for Peace.

1. Twin Pop

2. ST

3. lemonymelon

4. IDNE

5. andromeda

6. Riranor

7. PEace!

8. RainThinker

9. akaslickster

10. woon

11. Grayven

12. Crazypainter

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This is Riranor's description for Peace to use to write a poem:

Painful Memories

This is for TwinPop, Star Tiger, LemonyMelon, Andromeda and Riranor and has all the poems and descriptions so far:

Twin Pop:

(Actual Poem Subject: The Victim)

I cherish the injustice

And hold it in my heart like a dried dead flower.

It chafes my peace; scrapes my anxiety with a sharp edged knife.

You wronged me and I righteously hold you accountable

For your sins and your guilt and your shame unsurpassed.

I am an innocent lamb. I did nothing wrong!

You are a lion who devoured me with no remorse.

Cut me. Made me bleed. Laughed your cruel heart out.

I would rather die a thousand deaths than forgive you

And relieve my pain or restore my sanity.

Star Tiger:

misery

lemonymelon:

Somewhere among the multitude,

All is silent,

And a lonely soul

Stays sedentary in a corner,

As World drifts by.

Regretful over all that has

been said and done,

Falling into Nowhere,

Drowned with what's inside.

IDoNotExist:

Discontented Futility

andromeda:

No words

It's raining for hours

My thoughts swarm

In the corner

Dust of my anger

Unrested

Portraits with no faces

Illusive

Guitar with no strings

Is telling stories

Weaved by your fingers

And there's nothing but

Darkness

Silence

And Pain

Riranor:

Painful Memories

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If I may assist here. We are currently on Peace who needs to write a poem from Riranor's description. I have posted Riranor's description below for Peace.

1. Twin Pop

2. ST

3. lemonymelon

4. IDNE

5. andromeda

6. Riranor

7. PEace!

8. RainThinker

9. akaslickster

10. woon

11. Grayven

12. Crazypainter

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This is Riranor's description for Peace to use to write a poem:

Painful Memories

This is for TwinPop, Star Tiger, LemonyMelon, Andromeda and Riranor and has all the poems and descriptions so far:

Twin Pop:

(Actual Poem Subject: The Victim)

I cherish the injustice

And hold it in my heart like a dried dead flower.

It chafes my peace; scrapes my anxiety with a sharp edged knife.

You wronged me and I righteously hold you accountable

For your sins and your guilt and your shame unsurpassed.

I am an innocent lamb. I did nothing wrong!

You are a lion who devoured me with no remorse.

Cut me. Made me bleed. Laughed your cruel heart out.

I would rather die a thousand deaths than forgive you

And relieve my pain or restore my sanity.

Star Tiger:

misery

lemonymelon:

Somewhere among the multitude,

All is silent,

And a lonely soul

Stays sedentary in a corner,

As World drifts by.

Regretful over all that has

been said and done,

Falling into Nowhere,

Drowned with what's inside.

IDoNotExist:

Discontented Futility

andromeda:

No words

It's raining for hours

My thoughts swarm

In the corner

Dust of my anger

Unrested

Portraits with no faces

Illusive

Guitar with no strings

Is telling stories

Weaved by your fingers

And there's nothing but

Darkness

Silence

And Pain

Riranor:

Painful Memories

Sorry!!

the pain

the hurt

in my brain

the sad

the mad

drives me insane

a visual ache

in my head

i simply want to

go to bed

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I'm PMing Slick Now ;)

Annoyances
Hooray.This is for woon only:::
Sometimes you get many, other times not any.

People cause these here and there, insects biting on your ear.

Rotten odors or awful music,

all of which can make you sick.

Bratty kids or ugly death,

what a shame to be on meth.

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Slick, I am a bit confused as you seem describing many things.

anyway, I make a try.

A lousy restaurant at the dark back street, where children are crying. Rubbish and dead mice can be seen beside the street.

Am I correctly give the description as per what you want to tell, slick? :huh:

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Slick, I am a bit confused as you seem describing many things.

anyway, I make a try.

A lousy restaurant at the dark back street, where children are crying. Rubbish and dead mice can be seen beside the street.

Am I correctly give the description as per what you want to tell, slick? :huh:

Actually Woon only two words are sufficient what you wrote is too much, you were supposed to title the poem! ;)

Edited by andromeda
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Woon's caption may have divlulged a little too much information, but inspiration abounds.(It is almost a poem in it's own right.) We'll see what comes of it. I must warn you all that it may take the weekend to accomplish the task, but I'll do my best.

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Woon's caption may have divlulged a little too much information, but inspiration abounds.(It is almost a poem in it's own right.) We'll see what comes of it. I must warn you all that it may take the weekend to accomplish the task, but I'll do my best.

OK, I get what I knew what andromeda try to tell me. A description should be in short one. So I try to make a short one.

Unpleasant situation

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Please understand,

As I share this rhyme,

That I don’t like to complain.

At least not ALL the time! ;)

I must share, however,

Events most unnerving,

That happened at lunch,

While the waiter was serving. <_<

His mind was elsewhere,

A state quite distracted.

His attention, it seems,

Toward a fair lass, was attracted. :wub:

His intentions were noble,

To freshen up my iced-tea.

But as his eye wandered,

All he “freshened” was ME! :o

A lap full of beverage,

But he didn’t stop there!

As his gaze followed beauty,

So too, drink in my HAIR! :angry:

“Enough!” I exclaimed,

And couldn’t help but to laugh.

“What were you thinking?!”

“I ordered decaf...” :P

I will PM Crazypainter immediately.

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:lol: , amazing poem, Grayven! That had me giggling like a hyena for quite a while ;) I especially love the smileys at the end of each paragraph :P Great job!!! I believe that was the first time that anyone wrote such a funny poem in the history of this game :lol: Edited by star_tiger
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:lol: , amazing poem, Grayven! That had me giggling like a hyena for quite a while ;) I especially love the smileys at the end of each paragraph :P Great job!!! I believe that was the first time that anyone wrote such a funny poem in the history of this game :lol:

I second that! :lol: Great poem!!! :D

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