deannaart Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 Magma sitting beneath the surface No one notices it right now Pressure builds the more it's kept in Raising the magma to the rim's brow When finally the pressure builds so much The walls can hold it no longer The lava bursts out from the volcano Covering everything, for nothing's stronger The fiery blaze shoots up and out Exploding with tension built up inside Everyone runs far, in search for cover Finding the safest places to hide Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 (edited) Magma sitting beneath the surface No one notices it right now Pressure builds the more it's kept in Raising the magma to the rim's brow When finally the pressure builds so much The walls can hold it no longer The lava bursts out from the volcano Covering everything, for nothing's stronger The fiery blaze shoots up and out Exploding with tension built up inside Everyone runs far, in search for cover Finding the safest places to hide Another beautiful one. when you fight with someone...when you hold things in, and keep holding them until finally one day you can't take it anymore and you blow up - about everything. Edited August 3, 2009 by MrsP Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted August 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 Another beautiful one. when you fight with someone...when you hold things in, and keep holding them until finally one day you can't take it anymore and you blow up - about everything. I thank you for the compliment. This is not quite as elegantly written as usual, but here it is anyways, for your enjoyment. You've got the right idea going on here, but how would you go about phrasing it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 holding you anger back til you explodemaybe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 I thank you for the compliment. This is not quite as elegantly written as usual, but here it is anyways, for your enjoyment. You've got the right idea going on here, but how would you go about phrasing it? boiling mad? a blow up? I will have to think on how to phrase that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted August 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 holding you anger back til you explodemaybe Again, looking for how to phrase that... boiling mad? a blow up? I will have to think on how to phrase that. These are good... keep thinking like this Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 plainglazed Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 to breath fire? or, maybe better blow one's top? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted August 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 to breath fire? or, maybe better blow one's top? CONGRATS!!!!! PG swoops in with the win!! BLOW YOUR TOP Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted August 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 Solved by the great PG! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 plainglazed Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Cooel, what an early morning surprise. Had not even realized. Thanks Deanna for another fantastic metaphoric brain teaser. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 I got it! it's a zit! Well, it does make people run and hide. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Magma sitting beneath the surface
No one notices it right now
Pressure builds the more it's kept in
Raising the magma to the rim's brow
When finally the pressure builds so much
The walls can hold it no longer
The lava bursts out from the volcano
Covering everything, for nothing's stronger
The fiery blaze shoots up and out
Exploding with tension built up inside
Everyone runs far, in search for cover
Finding the safest places to hide
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