deannaart Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 The bear returned to his den Where his mistress found him within Your breath smells of tainted blood And it's seeping from your skin All I want is for you to get help But I don't know how to begin I want this movie to be over Waiting for the screen to say "fin" Your anger is something palpable Self medicated with blood I just don't know what to do Take our precious cub from the flood? It's superficial problems that caused This whole bloody mess to begin No matter where we run to These problems could still win Your anger really scares me Not just me, but our cub too I don't want her to spend Her life being terrified of you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 EDM Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 The bear returned to his den Where his mistress found him within Your breath smells of tainted blood And it's seeping from your skin All I want is for you to get help But I don't know how to begin I want this movie to be over Waiting for the screen to say "fin" Your anger is something palpable Self medicated with blood I just don't know what to do Take our precious cub from the flood? It's superficial problems that caused This whole bloody mess to begin No matter where we run to These problems could still win Your anger really scares me Not just me, but our cub too I don't want her to spend Her life being terrified of you blind rage...??? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted June 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 blind rage...??? Really good guess EDM! That is definitely what is the cause for this story to take place, but not the answer I'm looking to have derived from the story. Thanx, and please do try again! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 EDM Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 anger kills...?, or maybe.....if looks could kill??? ok, the 2nd one is silly....... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 a divorce? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 21, 2009 Report Share Posted June 21, 2009 a divorce? An angry alcoholic.. Coming home drunk and taking it out on the 'mama bear' and her 'cub'... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted June 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 An angry alcoholic.. Coming home drunk and taking it out on the 'mama bear' and her 'cub'...Good job Vixen!!! Scary subject. ANGRY ALCOHOLIC (SCARING MAMA AND BABY) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted June 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 a divorce? Great insight. This does seem to allude to a divorce. Though not the right answer, a great answer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted June 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 Great job everyone! Thanx for playing along with me! Sorry my metaphors are so dark. I try to write light-hearted ones, but they're just never as good. They turn out best when I pull from real life, and real life is bleak. Thanx for sticking through it! ~Deannaart Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 EDM Posted June 22, 2009 Report Share Posted June 22, 2009 AAARRRRGH!!!! CHESS_VIXEN'S ANSWER WAS MY NEXT GUESS, BUT I WAS IN SCHOOL!!!!! good job chess_vixen! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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The bear returned to his den
Where his mistress found him within
Your breath smells of tainted blood
And it's seeping from your skin
All I want is for you to get help
But I don't know how to begin
I want this movie to be over
Waiting for the screen to say "fin"
Your anger is something palpable
Self medicated with blood
I just don't know what to do
Take our precious cub from the flood?
It's superficial problems that caused
This whole bloody mess to begin
No matter where we run to
These problems could still win
Your anger really scares me
Not just me, but our cub too
I don't want her to spend
Her life being terrified of you
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