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Good luck with this one, sorry it's so long, i just got carried away.. did not work too much on it either, i wanted to post something before the end of the day but had lotsa work lolzz

Because of my inability to win,

I went into exile and was forgotten by most.

Till this moment I am feeling Grim,

All day, all I see is my personal curse.

There’s a love, nay, a passion they once had,

Today I feel have been replaced,

By the riotous rumbling of this world,

And the un-ending motion of the populace.

My joy has gone to pain,

And love for me has fell into disregard,

In this world filled with brains,

This peace less world plunged in disorder.

I blame the gods and the heavens,

For never have they shown them their presence.

But I hope someday I will be reborn,

From fire to ashes I shall be known.

My weakness is just what I bear,

My remorse is what I carry.

And today needles to say, I see my heir,

Will one day end up weary.

Of all the stories I tell, the words I spell,

Only on me will they ever impact.

For this I must say is my quarrel,

That my being, for a few only, was ever left intact.

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Good luck with this one, sorry it's so long, i just got carried away.. did not work too much on it either, i wanted to post something before the end of the day but had lotsa work lolzz

Because of my inability to win,

I went into exile and was forgotten by most.

Till this moment I am feeling Grim,

All day, all I see is my personal curse.

There’s a love, nay, a passion they once had,

Today I feel have been replaced,

By the riotous rumbling of this world,

And the un-ending motion of the populace.

My joy has gone to pain,

And love for me has fell into disregard,

In this world filled with brains,

This peace less world plunged in disorder.

I blame the gods and the heavens,

For never have they shown them their presence.

But I hope someday I will be reborn,

From fire to ashes I shall be known.

My weakness is just what I bear,

My remorse is what I carry.

And today needles to say, I see my heir,

Will one day end up weary.

Of all the stories I tell, the words I spell,

Only on me will they ever impact.

For this I must say is my quarrel,

That my being, for a few only, was ever left intact.

K, let's get goin':D

faith or spirituality?

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Here kitty, kitty, kitty...... Gotta go back to work soon!!! :D

Ps Please take no offense at that nettiger.....I truly was kidding!

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Sorry guys for late reply, me still at work lol only 5:10PM over here XD

so no to all answers, here are a few hints for you and for y'all

I am something you cannot see, something achievable by any human beings, i can be reached with human made materials but that can cost a few

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Sorry guys for late reply, me still at work lol only 5:10PM over here XD

so no to all answers, here are a few hints for you and for y'all

I am something you cannot see, something achievable by any human beings, i can be reached with human made materials but that can cost a few

Self Improvement? or Self Worth?

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No to both you guyz sorry :)

I think i'll leave this one for a while, leave as many answers as possible and i'll give out the flowers to the winner when i log on :) Bubyez!

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you know what? that's how the riddle started but it took a whole other direction! so i guess you are wrong for the completed riddle as it has nothing to do with it that anymore, but you are quite right for what i first wanted to write lol

So.. no happy yet, please do keep guessing :)

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Good luck with this one, sorry it's so long, i just got carried away.. did not work too much on it either, i wanted to post something before the end of the day but had lotsa work lolzz

Because of my inability to win,

I went into exile and was forgotten by most.

Till this moment I am feeling Grim,

All day, all I see is my personal curse.

There’s a love, nay, a passion they once had,

Today I feel have been replaced,

By the riotous rumbling of this world,

And the un-ending motion of the populace.

My joy has gone to pain,

And love for me has fell into disregard,

In this world filled with brains,

This peace less world plunged in disorder.

I blame the gods and the heavens,

For never have they shown them their presence.

But I hope someday I will be reborn,

From fire to ashes I shall be known.

My weakness is just what I bear,

My remorse is what I carry.

And today needles to say, I see my heir,

Will one day end up weary.

Of all the stories I tell, the words I spell,

Only on me will they ever impact.

For this I must say is my quarrel,

That my being, for a few only, was ever left intact.

SENSIBILITY

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