EDM 101 Posted October 27, 2010 Report Share Posted October 27, 2010 A stream was once made by a mountain and the rain... Happily it flowed like a train... The rain and mountain full of a loving dream... Grew flowers along the sides of the stream... The stream got bigger, she was going to be a river... But that's when things got bad... The mountain began to crumble after lightning struck... And the rain could do nothing to help, how sad... The mountain crumbled; the waste began to slide..... It fell in the growing river; the river lost its pride... The rain tried to help; it did all it could.... And somehow made the river better... But the river was reaching its last... It looked somewhat like a gutter... Then finally with a groan, the river got smaller... And mucky, it began to seem... And with a lot of swampy stuff... It became a bog.....now scream... Quote Link to post Share on other sites
0 EDM 101 Posted November 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2010 And WE HAVE A WINNER!!!! An abused child.... Thank you all for trying and guessing....I hope it was not too disappointing..... Quote Link to post Share on other sites
0 Guest Posted November 8, 2010 Report Share Posted November 8, 2010 Yay for me! I used to dance w/Deanna, it reminded me of her style. Well written EDM Quote Link to post Share on other sites
0 EDM 101 Posted November 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2010 (edited) Thanks... It was kinda inspired by her....... Edited November 8, 2010 by EDM Quote Link to post Share on other sites
0 Guest Posted November 9, 2010 Report Share Posted November 9, 2010 (edited) Yay for the credit! Cool story EDM Edited November 9, 2010 by LJayden Quote Link to post Share on other sites
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EDM 101
A stream was once made by a mountain and the rain...
Happily it flowed like a train...
The rain and mountain full of a loving dream...
Grew flowers along the sides of the stream...
The stream got bigger, she was going to be a river...
But that's when things got bad...
The mountain began to crumble after lightning struck...
And the rain could do nothing to help, how sad...
The mountain crumbled; the waste began to slide.....
It fell in the growing river; the river lost its pride...
The rain tried to help; it did all it could....
And somehow made the river better...
But the river was reaching its last...
It looked somewhat like a gutter...
Then finally with a groan, the river got smaller...
And mucky, it began to seem...
And with a lot of swampy stuff...
It became a bog.....now scream...
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