Guest Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Always looking at candy, wanting it so. Couldn’t have it yet, would have to grow. Now older and ready to go to the store, Wanting to end the wait, now at the door. Into the shop and looking all around, Searching and waiting. No candy to be found. Nothing left here but cravings and such sorrow. Maybe search elsewhere, for candy to borrow. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 a woman who had a miscarriage and is looking to adopt. Or artificial insemination. Hello MrsP Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 a woman who had a miscarriage and is looking to adopt. Or artificial insemination. Hello MrsP Hello, nice to see You are definitely on the right track, and some of that could go with the answer. But I am looking for a little more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Fantastic metaphor MrsP!!!A barren (infertile) woman looking to adopt Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Fantastic metaphor MrsP!!!A barren (infertile) woman looking to adopt Yes, that's great and music had the right idea too. But I am wanting you guys to get what I am talking about in the first few stanzas, not just the end. Its implied in your guesses but I'd love to see it. And thanks so much, that is soooo great coming from you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 A girlalways wants to be a mother when she is yuong, then when she is grown, she cant have any of her own Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Yes, that is it JKB, exactly what I had in mind. Along with the options Music & deannaart gave. I have to give credit to all 3 of you. Good jobs! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 (edited) A girl fantasizing about having a baby when she grows up, then when she finally grows up, finds out she is infertile, so she decideds to adopt. (even though she is devastated) Hope that's good enough... And you're very welcome!!!!! EDIT: I don't type fast enough! Edited August 7, 2009 by deannaart Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 A girl fantasizing about having a baby when she grows up, then when she finally grows up, finds out she is infertile, so she decideds to adopt. (even though she is devastated) Hope that's good enough... And you're very welcome!!!!! EDIT: I don't type fast enough! I could not have worded it better myself. That is exaclty what this is about. I hope you liked it, sorry it was so easy. Thanks for playing along Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Always looking at candy, wanting it so.
Couldn’t have it yet, would have to grow.
Now older and ready to go to the store,
Wanting to end the wait, now at the door.
Into the shop and looking all around,
Searching and waiting. No candy to be found.
Nothing left here but cravings and such sorrow.
Maybe search elsewhere, for candy to borrow.
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