deannaart Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 The boy got the puppy When he as just five The pup was his everything A toy come alive They did everything together Playing fetch and playing dead The boy fell so much in love He was in way over his head Then one day, the boy's parents Decided to get a divorce He couldn't keep the dog, they said And he cried til he was hoarse The day came that boy and dog Must say their last goodbyes The boy was so strong til then Now all he does is cries Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Well, guys, since it's mad early, and no one has yet shown up, I think I'll go take a cat nap. Please feel free to guess on this and I will reply to your answers soon. Thanx! ~Deanna Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 The boy got the puppy When he as just five The pup was his everything A toy come alive They did everything together Playing fetch and playing dead The boy fell so much in love He was in way over his head Then one day, the boy's parents Decided to get a divorce He couldn't keep the dog, they said And he cried til he was hoarse The day came that boy and dog Must say their last goodbyes The boy was so strong til then Now all he does is cries First Love? or..puppy love Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 First Love? or..puppy love Thanx for the compliment! That actually does fit quite well... Weird I didn't make that connection. Unfortunately, that's not it. actually, to steer you in the right direction, I'm looking for a simple raw emotion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 Thanx for the compliment! That actually does fit quite well... Weird I didn't make that connection. Unfortunately, that's not it. actually, to steer you in the right direction, I'm looking for a simple raw emotion. passion Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 passion yes, they had that, but what happened at the end of the poem? How do they feel now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 yes, they had that, but what happened at the end of the poem? How do they feel now. devastated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 devastated You're on the right track, but not the right word I'm looking for. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 depressed, or just broken hearted Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 distraught Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 9, 2009 Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 heartbroken Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 depressed, or just broken hearted Oh, you are so close, if it was a snake, it'd bite you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 distraught Nope, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted June 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2009 (edited) heartbroken YES!!!!! This is exactly the word I was looking for. MrsP you came SO close! But Chicory swoops in for the kill! Great job both! HEARTBROKEN Well, since they both technically mean the same thing, I'm going to call it a tie. Yay to MrsP and Chicory! Edited June 9, 2009 by deannaart Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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The boy got the puppy
When he as just five
The pup was his everything
A toy come alive
They did everything together
Playing fetch and playing dead
The boy fell so much in love
He was in way over his head
Then one day, the boy's parents
Decided to get a divorce
He couldn't keep the dog, they said
And he cried til he was hoarse
The day came that boy and dog
Must say their last goodbyes
The boy was so strong til then
Now all he does is cries
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