Guest Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 He beats down the door He sleeps with no pillow His sons are at war 'neath the deep-rooted willow Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 He beats down the door He sleeps with no pillow His sons are at war 'neath the deep-rooted willow carpenter ants? or termites/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 carpenter ants? or termites/ Not what I had in mind, but I like your idea. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 worm? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 tiger_lily111 Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 river Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 Since the first is too ambiguous I'll post a second stanza in a few minutes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 He bakes in the cold His back grows no mold His shadow lies still After the great one doth till Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 He bakes in the cold His back grows no mold His shadow lies still After the great one doth till a glacier? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 1, 2009 Report Share Posted June 1, 2009 a grass Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 the wind or some type of storm? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 (edited) "his sons are at war" i can think of pseudo sons but nothing to explain them being at war... unlessa blanket of snow (blanket implies sleeping) freezing and thawing of earth (sons (freezing and thawing water drops) at war beneath the willow) So-- a snow storm? though i think glacier still fits Edited June 2, 2009 by chicory Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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He beats down the door
He sleeps with no pillow
His sons are at war
'neath the deep-rooted willow
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