deannaart Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Slowly, creeping down the alley The shadowy figure does sneak Further and further it goes Hoping for his first peek There she stands, Hair like fire Pale ivory complexion It smiles with glee, having the knowledge It gets to ruin this visage of perfection It goes silently to her side And spreads it's shadowy fingers The amount of damage it inflicts Depends on how long it lingers The shadow reaches deep inside Careful not to miss a spot Her fever spikes, and pulse skyrockets Then it leaves her there to rot She's now getting worse instead of better As was the shadow man's design He fed on everything she had to give Until finally she was dying More sleepless nights up ahead Death just around the bend She needs rest and sleep to recouperate And maybe just the help of a dear friend Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Ok, Nobody seems to be on right now, so I'm gonna go try for a nap. Feel free to guess, and I'll be back shortly with some answers!!! Thanx! ~Deanna Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Fileobrother Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 cancer or terminal disease Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 someones bowling Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 cancer or terminal diseaseno, But you're so close. This could be terminal if not taken care of properly(Rest and help from friend) This thing starts out small and seemingly insignificant.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 someones bowling haha, no. no one is bowling. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Sounds like an infection Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Fileobrother Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Sounds like an infection or something psychological, like stress or depression. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Sounds like an infection Thanx for the compliment!! And horray!! you hit it right on the mark!! An Infection Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 or something psychological, like stress or depression. Really good guess! But, sorry, no. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Fileobrother Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Really good guess! But, sorry, no. Yeahhh, I was hope Spyder was wrong because his answer sounded so perfect.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Yeahhh, I was hope Spyder was wrong because his answer sounded so perfect.... yeah. But to his credit, it is the first of my riddles he's ever solved. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 yeah. But to his credit, it is the first of my riddles he's ever solved. sounds like a challenge bring it! lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Slowly, creeping down the alley
The shadowy figure does sneak
Further and further it goes
Hoping for his first peek
There she stands, Hair like fire
Pale ivory complexion
It smiles with glee, having the knowledge
It gets to ruin this visage of perfection
It goes silently to her side
And spreads it's shadowy fingers
The amount of damage it inflicts
Depends on how long it lingers
The shadow reaches deep inside
Careful not to miss a spot
Her fever spikes, and pulse skyrockets
Then it leaves her there to rot
She's now getting worse instead of better
As was the shadow man's design
He fed on everything she had to give
Until finally she was dying
More sleepless nights up ahead
Death just around the bend
She needs rest and sleep to recouperate
And maybe just the help of a dear friend
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