Guest Posted May 14, 2009 Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 Ok that last one was way too easy...let's try try try again. Four walls, with halls, a fortress of sorts This place, a space, is known to time, distort. Tables, chairs, and lights may be found, When you come to have a look around. Take your time, maybe search your mind, Many a person, their boredom is worsened Come if you need information, accurate But only if you won't procrastinate. Name it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Pickett Posted May 14, 2009 Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 Ok that last one was way too easy...let's try try try again. Four walls, with halls, a fortress of sorts This place, a space, is known to time, distort. Tables, chairs, and lights may be found, When you come to have a look around. Take your time, maybe search your mind, Many a person, their boredom is worsened Come if you need information, accurate But only if you won't procrastinate. Name it. a library? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 14, 2009 Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 You are right...you just shoot 'em down as I throw 'em up. Nice work! Could you maybe tell me what gave my last two away so easily? Haha... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Pickett Posted May 14, 2009 Report Share Posted May 14, 2009 You are right...you just shoot 'em down as I throw 'em up. Nice work! Could you maybe tell me what gave my last two away so easily? Haha... Four walls, with halls, a fortress of sorts First thought, obviously a building...and with "halls" made me think academic This place, a space, is known to time, distort. Someplace where you lose track of time Tables, chairs, and lights may be found, umm...pretty self explanatory When you come to have a look around. Take your time, maybe search your mind, Ah, someplace intellectual... Many a person, their boredom is worsened Some people are bored at this place Come if you need information, accurate A building that contains a lot of information... But only if you won't procrastinate. Typically procrastination is with regards to an assignment or homework of some sort...again, academic So, put all of them together, you get a library. It's very well written, and there isn't ONE line that gave it away...You are just much too literal with many of the lines, and you give a lot of different clues. Basically, if you wanted to make them harder, maybe just more symbolism, plays on words, double meanings, etc (read shakeepuddin's riddles for great examples)...I'll comment on the other one of yours I did earlier in that post... Good job, keep it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Ok that last one was way too easy...let's try try try again.
Four walls, with halls, a fortress of sorts
This place, a space, is known to time, distort.
Tables, chairs, and lights may be found,
When you come to have a look around.
Take your time, maybe search your mind,
Many a person, their boredom is worsened
Come if you need information, accurate
But only if you won't procrastinate.
Name it.
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