Guest Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 this metaphor isn't mine, I just turned it into rhyme: when I get home from school, I take off my pack. It's been a long day, so cut me some slack! i've shoved alot in there, but I dont know what, somthing from my brain, a note from my heart, and something else from my gut. I'd better sort through this, or it just might pop, it'll all fall to the floor with one big old plop! I reach in and pull something out, now I know what my next riddle's about! this thing is a mess that I need to sort through, or else it'll spil all over you! why did I let it get this way? why didn't I sort it everyday? but now there's only one thing to do, find out what it is and fix it with you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 tiger_lily111 Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 planner / day-by-day schedule etc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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0 Guest Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 locker No...it's a metaphor remember! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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0 Guest Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 homework Metaphor! nothing to do with school! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Metaphor! nothing to do with school! Jeesh, ok. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 (edited) this metaphor isn't mine, I just turned it into rhyme: when I get home from school, I take off my pack. It's been a long day, so cut me some slack! i've shoved alot in there, but I dont know what, somthing from my brain, a note from my heart, and something else from my gut. I'd better sort through this, or it just might pop, it'll all fall to the floor with one big old plop! I reach in and pull something out, now I know what my next riddle's about! this thing is a mess that I need to sort through, or else it'll spil all over you! why did I let it get this way? why didn't I sort it everyday? but now there's only one thing to do, find out what it is and fix it with you.complexities, misunderstandings in a relationship Edited June 16, 2009 by chicory Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 Jeesh, ok. Sorry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 a mind, memories, thoughts...all shoved in there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 this metaphor isn't mine, I just turned it into rhyme: when I get home from school, I take off my pack. It's been a long day, so cut me some slack! i've shoved alot in there, but I dont know what, somthing from my brain, a note from my heart, and something else from my gut. I'd better sort through this, or it just might pop, it'll all fall to the floor with one big old plop! I reach in and pull something out, now I know what my next riddle's about! this thing is a mess that I need to sort through, or else it'll spil all over you! why did I let it get this way? why didn't I sort it everyday? but now there's only one thing to do, find out what it is and fix it with you. the collection of emotional and mental reactions to the events of the past days Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 the collection of emotional and mental reactions to the events of the past days Are you serious!? I can't help it. You're a genius chicory! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 16, 2009 Report Share Posted June 16, 2009 By the way if you wondering who's metaphor this is American girl book Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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this metaphor isn't mine,
I just turned it into rhyme:
when I get home from school, I take off my pack.
It's been a long day, so cut me some slack!
i've shoved alot in there, but I dont know what,
somthing from my brain, a note from my heart, and something else from my gut.
I'd better sort through this, or it just might pop,
it'll all fall to the floor with one big old plop!
I reach in and pull something out,
now I know what my next riddle's about!
this thing is a mess that I need to sort through,
or else it'll spil all over you!
why did I let it get this way?
why didn't I sort it everyday?
but now there's only one thing to do,
find out what it is and fix it with you.
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