deannaart Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 A man has a bee problem It fills him up with rage Fills him up so much, in fact He should be locked in a cage So he goes to buy some bee killer From the local store He walks outside, feeling empowered Soon the bees will live no more He arrives back at home to find The bees just ripe for the picking He shoots them down, one by one In his head, the death toll is ticking His rage won't be alleviated Till every lats one is dead For the rage and lust to kill Has overrun his neurotic head Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 a shooting spree, maybe like columnbine or other high schools You're quite a good poet Deannaart (especially with your metaphors), do you post your poetry anywhere else? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 serial killer or a mass shooting Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted June 2, 2009 Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 Me playing gears of war 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted June 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 You're quite a good poet Deannaart (especially with your metaphors), do you post your poetry anywhere else?a shooting spree, maybe like columnbine or other high schools You are absolutely right shakazulu!!!!! And thank you so much for the compliment! I do not currently post anywhere else. Just kinda stumbled upon this site. Don't know much about the internet, i am ashamed to say.[spoiler='ANSWER: ']SHOOTING SPREE/ MASS MURDER Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted June 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 serial killer or a mass shootingYou are absolutely right with the second answer, but Shakazulu beat you to it. Sorry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted June 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2009 Me playing gears of war 2 Haha. Nice. Sounds like a lot of my friends now that you say that... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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A man has a bee problem
It fills him up with rage
Fills him up so much, in fact
He should be locked in a cage
So he goes to buy some bee killer
From the local store
He walks outside, feeling empowered
Soon the bees will live no more
He arrives back at home to find
The bees just ripe for the picking
He shoots them down, one by one
In his head, the death toll is ticking
His rage won't be alleviated
Till every lats one is dead
For the rage and lust to kill
Has overrun his neurotic head
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