deannaart Posted May 29, 2009 Report Share Posted May 29, 2009 The man sits in a room alone With pure white walls surrounding Slowly blood trickles down in pools From the ceiling he's drowning Orange, yellow, green and blue The room a spinning kaleidoscope The man just sits and watches As he comes to the end of his rope Now the room is spinning, swimming At an alarming, yet tantalizing rate Sadly, though, the man doesn't know That this is to be his fate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Does he suffer from schizophrenia? (I hope I did the spoiler thing correctly, if not I apologize). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 plainglazed Posted May 30, 2009 Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 (edited) The man sits in a room alone With pure white walls surrounding Slowly blood trickles down in pools From the ceiling he's drowning Orange, yellow, green and blue The room a spinning kaleidoscope The man just sits and watches As he comes to the end of his rope Now the room is spinning, swimming At an alarming, yet tantalizing rate Sadly, though, the man doesn't know That this is to be his fate Another extremely vivid poetic riddle. an artist painting? Hallucinating from visceral inspiration, maybe. white walls-blank canvas, all those colors, instinct taking over, but sadly at the end am not sure Edited May 30, 2009 by plainglazed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Another extremely vivid poetic riddle. an artist painting? Hallucinating from visceral inspiration, maybe. white walls-blank canvas, all those colors, instinct taking over, but sadly at the end am not sure Oooohhhh! Very cool answer PG! Not the one I was looking for, but a good idea, still. The answer is above if you're curious... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Does he suffer from schizophrenia? (I hope I did the spoiler thing correctly, if not I apologize). Not schizophrenia, exactly, but your train of thoughts is on the right track. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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The man sits in a room alone
With pure white walls surrounding
Slowly blood trickles down in pools
From the ceiling he's drowning
Orange, yellow, green and blue
The room a spinning kaleidoscope
The man just sits and watches
As he comes to the end of his rope
Now the room is spinning, swimming
At an alarming, yet tantalizing rate
Sadly, though, the man doesn't know
That this is to be his fate
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