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The Sun and Moon

Rise and fall

Doing their little dance

Each day at dawn

And at sunset

They steal a little glance

The moon brings gifts

Of the tides

And all the stars above

The Sun brings life

to plants and trees

And all the crops we love

Then closer they come

Till at last

They're standing back to back

Finally, turning around

They face each other

Eclipse! as they're shrouded in black

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maybe parents.. but it doesnt fit... i'm thinking of a long distance relationship

The Sun and Moon

Rise and fall

Doing their little dance

Each day at dawn

And at sunset

They steal a little glance

The moon brings gifts

Of the tides

And all the stars above

The Sun brings life

to plants and trees

And all the crops we love

Then closer they come

Till at last

They're standing back to back

Finally, turning around

They face each other

Eclipse! as they're shrouded in black

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The Sun and Moon

Rise and fall

Doing their little dance

Each day at dawn

And at sunset

They steal a little glance

The moon brings gifts

Of the tides

And all the stars above

The Sun brings life

to plants and trees

And all the crops we love

Then closer they come

Till at last

They're standing back to back

Finally, turning around

They face each other

Eclipse! as they're shrouded in black

Song... you know...

Strangers in the night...

Exchanging glances...

Buh Buh Buh Buh Buh... :):D

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Why do I feel like I'm the butt of a joke that I don't get? :huh:

Uhh.... Cause you're not! I was laughing because I'm pretty sure I stuck a song in PG's head :D I would never make you end of a joke, BUTT or otherwise! :lol: And for the record I think this poem is beautifully written! :thumbsup:

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Uhh.... I don't know...Cause you're not! I was laughing because I'm pretty sure I stuck a song in PG's head :D I would never make you the end of a joke, BUTT or otherwise! :lol: And for the record I think this poem is beautifully written! :thumbsup:

Edited quote above....brainz to figners not working lately! :D And I had to edit this too.....twice!

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Edited quote above....brainz to figners not working lately! :D And I had to edit this too.....twice!

You're Always editing! Like figners? Thanx for saying you like it. It's obvisouly not written well enough, since it's not seeming to convey my idea... I thought the moon and sun metaphor was so obvious that I shouldn't overload he riddle, but i think I'm going to have to add some lines or something...

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You're Always editing! Like figners? Thanx for saying you like it. It's obvisouly not written well enough, since it's not seeming to convey my idea... I thought the moon and sun metaphor was so obvious that I shouldn't overload he riddle, but i think I'm going to have to add some lines or something...
Like figners.... :P

:D

Is it a blind date? Or am I heading in the wrong direction?

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You're Always editing! Like figners? Thanx for saying you like it. It's obvisouly not written well enough, since it's not seeming to convey my idea... I thought the moon and sun metaphor was so obvious that I shouldn't overload he riddle, but i think I'm going to have to add some lines or something...

ts it to do with

opposites attract? shrouded in black? romeo and juliet?

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