Guest Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 I have never made a riddle, so I decided to try. it's a WAI, and I did it in approximately 15 minutes with few revisions. it's kinda wordy, watch out! on a new venture, my way I go, I linger naught, for onward bound am I! as I drift through these rolling hills, deep and low, I travel far and wide; low and behold, once I even heard a jungle weep and moan! I hear their cries, time and time again, as I soar through these gentle skies, ever I travel far and wide, caressing the face of mother earth; cursed am I with an eternal duty, charged by He himself! burdened am I, whose wings shant unfold, ever to see naught but woe upon this globe! i'm gonna condense it/revise it more for sure, but this is coherent enough to take a stab, I think. tell me what you think/suggestions welcome! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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0 Guest Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 (edited) byebye gets it first.. >.> how'd ya get it so quickly haha. I showed this to a few people before I put it here, and most people were like wtf a volcano? I dunno. haha. Edited April 26, 2009 by spookify Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 byebye gets it first.. >.> how'd ya get it so quickly haha. I showed this to a few people before I put it here, and most people were like wtf a volcano? I dunno. haha. i thought it was real obvious. it was the first thing that popped into my head and it seemed to fit is all Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 i thought it was real obvious. it was the first thing that popped into my head and it seemed to fit is all i've been changing it up. removed all of the obvious statements / words Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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I have never made a riddle, so I decided to try. it's a WAI, and I did it in approximately 15 minutes with few revisions. it's kinda wordy, watch out!
on a new venture, my way I go,
I linger naught, for onward bound am I!
as I drift through these rolling hills, deep and low,
I travel far and wide; low and behold,
once I even heard a jungle weep and moan!
I hear their cries, time and time again,
as I soar through these gentle skies,
ever I travel far and wide, caressing the face of mother earth;
cursed am I with an eternal duty, charged by He himself!
burdened am I, whose wings shant unfold,
ever to see naught but woe upon this globe!
i'm gonna condense it/revise it more for sure, but this is coherent enough to take a stab, I think. tell me what you think/suggestions welcome!
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