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I have never made a riddle, so I decided to try. it's a WAI, and I did it in approximately 15 minutes with few revisions. it's kinda wordy, watch out!

on a new venture, my way I go,

I linger naught, for onward bound am I!

as I drift through these rolling hills, deep and low,

I travel far and wide; low and behold,

once I even heard a jungle weep and moan!

I hear their cries, time and time again,

as I soar through these gentle skies,

ever I travel far and wide, caressing the face of mother earth;

cursed am I with an eternal duty, charged by He himself!

burdened am I, whose wings shant unfold,

ever to see naught but woe upon this globe!

i'm gonna condense it/revise it more for sure, but this is coherent enough to take a stab, I think. tell me what you think/suggestions welcome! :)

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byebye gets it first.. >.>

how'd ya get it so quickly haha. I showed this to a few people before I put it here, and most people were like wtf a volcano? I dunno. haha.

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byebye gets it first.. >.>

how'd ya get it so quickly haha. I showed this to a few people before I put it here, and most people were like wtf a volcano? I dunno. haha.

i thought it was real obvious. it was the first thing that popped into my head and it seemed to fit is all :D

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i thought it was real obvious. it was the first thing that popped into my head and it seemed to fit is all :D

i've been changing it up. removed all of the obvious statements / words :P

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