Guest Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 Just a True Friend As the child holds the hand of its parent So I hold you in my heart And thus joined together....never shall we part As the song of the bird brings enchantment so the sound of your voice brings me cheer your kind words then uplift me....and chase away my fear As the sparkel of raindrops brings freshness so the truth in your eyes bring me peace your look is just so loving....that all my worries cease As the glow of the sunset brings beauty so the warmth of your smile brings me hope you help me feel protected....I know that I will cope As the scent of the flower brings contentment so the naturalness brings me relief you always are so honest....in you I have belief As the power of the woodland brings healing so the touch of your hand brings me strength you gentleness so assures me....it stretches to any length As the colors of the rainbow bring pleasure so the brightness you show brings me fun Your presence so relaxes me....with you I feel at one As the child holds the hand of its parent so I hold you in my heart with you I feel so happy....Ive loved you from the start 9.2.98 Just Poems Lhiats Ben PS what does everyone think? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 akaslickster Posted May 16, 2008 Report Share Posted May 16, 2008 (edited) That was super! Greeting cards make a lot of money nowadays. Why not look into it? I can write as well. Though I need to be in the mood for it. I get so distracted when not living alone. Tell your Nan thanks for sharing it. It was very emotional, with such a natural theme to it. 10 Kudos to Nan! Simply beautiful. Edited May 16, 2008 by akaslickster Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 grey cells Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Great poem . And lovely too . Surely an ode to friendship . Any poem cannot be a beautiful rendition , unless it has come from deep down the heart . And the depth of this poem is indeed unfathomable. 3 cheers to Nanny!! I will rather make it 5 stars. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 (edited) I like that poem it's really good. I wrote this one a couple days ago and posted it on another site. everyone liked it... and i want to know what you think. good or bad (be honest) it's short but it's all i could think of at the moment.. Love Out Loud [L.O.L.] When life gives you lemons you make lemonade, When life gives you creativity you play charades. When life gives you sight you use to see your way, When life gives you light it brightens up your day. When life gives you voice you want to scream and shout, But you have yet to learn how to love out loud. Edited May 21, 2008 by Thuhchris Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 Just a True Friend As the child holds the hand of its parent So I hold you in my heart And thus joined together....never shall we part As the song of the bird brings enchantment so the sound of your voice brings me cheer your kind words then uplift me....and chase away my fear As the sparkel of raindrops brings freshness so the truth in your eyes bring me peace your look is just so loving....that all my worries cease As the glow of the sunset brings beauty so the warmth of your smile brings me hope you help me feel protected....I know that I will cope As the scent of the flower brings contentment so the naturalness brings me relief you always are so honest....in you I have belief As the power of the woodland brings healing so the touch of your hand brings me strength you gentleness so assures me....it stretches to any length As the colors of the rainbow bring pleasure so the brightness you show brings me fun Your presence so relaxes me....with you I feel at one As the child holds the hand of its parent so I hold you in my heart with you I feel so happy....Ive loved you from the start 9.2.98 Just Poems Lhiats Ben PS what does everyone think? it is very beautiful. I loved it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 I like that poem it's really good. I wrote this one a couple days ago and posted it on another site. everyone liked it... and i want to know what you think. good or bad (be honest) it's short but it's all i could think of at the moment.. Love Out Loud [L.O.L.] When life gives you lemons you make lemonade, When life gives you creativity you play charades. When life gives you sight you use to see your way, When life gives you light it brightens up your day. When life gives you voice you want to scream and shout, But you have yet to learn how to love out loud. nice one there! I wish I could write too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 grey cells Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 I like that poem it's really good. I wrote this one a couple days ago and posted it on another site. everyone liked it... and i want to know what you think. good or bad (be honest) it's short but it's all i could think of at the moment.. Love Out Loud [L.O.L.] When life gives you lemons you make lemonade, When life gives you creativity you play charades. When life gives you sight you use to see your way, When life gives you light it brightens up your day. When life gives you voice you want to scream and shout, But you have yet to learn how to love out loud. Hey! Good one , Chris . You could use your poetical ability in creating more riddles . And L.O.L Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 22, 2008 Report Share Posted May 22, 2008 Hey! Good one , Chris . You could use your poetical ability in creating more riddles . And L.O.L thanks... glad you like it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 akaslickster Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 (edited) I like that poem it's really good. I wrote this one a couple days ago and posted it on another site. everyone liked it... and i want to know what you think. good or bad (be honest) it's short but it's all i could think of at the moment.. Love Out Loud [L.O.L.] When life gives you lemons you make lemonade, When life gives you creativity you play charades. When life gives you sight you use to see your way, When life gives you light it brightens up your day. When life gives you voice you want to scream and shout, But you have yet to learn how to love out loud. Hey Chris, I have not known you that long, but you seem to be on the road toward writing song lyrics. Wishing you all the luck. Slickster P>S. Keep up the good work! Edited May 23, 2008 by akaslickster Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 I like that poem it's really good. I wrote this one a couple days ago and posted it on another site. everyone liked it... and i want to know what you think. good or bad (be honest) it's short but it's all i could think of at the moment.. Love Out Loud [L.O.L.] When life gives you lemons you make lemonade, When life gives you creativity you play charades. When life gives you sight you use to see your way, When life gives you light it brightens up your day. When life gives you voice you want to scream and shout, But you have yet to learn how to love out loud. Hey Chris, I have not known you that long, but you seem to be on the road toward writing song lyrics. Wishing you all the luck. Slickster P>S. Keep up the good work! i already worte one song.. it's a hip-hop song, but i can't find it right now. but that's my dream is to become a musician Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 akaslickster Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 (edited) i already worte one song.. it's a hip-hop song, but i can't find it right now. but that's my dream is to become a musician I tried a rap song long ago but I grew out of it. My graduations came 1st priority and then it was party time. Edited May 23, 2008 by akaslickster Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted May 23, 2008 Report Share Posted May 23, 2008 I tried a rap song long ago but I grew out of it. My graduations came 1st priority and then it was party time. yeah i know.. i write songs/poems in my spare time Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Just a True Friend
As the child holds the hand of its parent
So I hold you in my heart
And thus joined together....never shall we part
As the song of the bird brings enchantment
so the sound of your voice brings me cheer
your kind words then uplift me....and chase away my fear
As the sparkel of raindrops brings freshness
so the truth in your eyes bring me peace
your look is just so loving....that all my worries cease
As the glow of the sunset brings beauty
so the warmth of your smile brings me hope
you help me feel protected....I know that I will cope
As the scent of the flower brings contentment
so the naturalness brings me relief
you always are so honest....in you I have belief
As the power of the woodland brings healing
so the touch of your hand brings me strength
you gentleness so assures me....it stretches to any length
As the colors of the rainbow bring pleasure
so the brightness you show brings me fun
Your presence so relaxes me....with you I feel at one
As the child holds the hand of its parent
so I hold you in my heart
with you I feel so happy....Ive loved you from the start
9.2.98
Just Poems
Lhiats Ben
PS what does everyone think?
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