EDM Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 Walking alone one day, looking for company I see a sight that brings me to a stop 'She' was alone too; one among many Her beauty took my breath away I was told of her before But no one could give her justice Not even me; she was so lovely Her soft voice...It was magic! I took a step closer....and then I gasped... My eyes now went to 'him' instead He was perfect! The way he moved! It was as if in a dream His voice....It was almost bliss I went straight and hugged him And together he and I Went away together... I can't believe I just wrote this one! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 MissKitten Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 well, ill give it a shot. so theres a man, and he sees a woman, and shes pretty. and then he takes a step forward, and sees a stray puppy, and walks away with 'him', seeing how 'dog is man's best friend.' Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 EDM Posted January 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 No....but thanks for starting this off... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Scudo Posted January 21, 2011 Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 She is the Mississippi River He is a River Boat! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 EDM Posted January 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2011 Hi Scudo!!! Long time!!! No...but your thinking will get you to the answer.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 Quick sand and a vine? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted January 22, 2011 Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 wind in the trees? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 EDM Posted January 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2011 no to both....but good thinking.... I think Scudo was closer.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Thalia Posted January 23, 2011 Report Share Posted January 23, 2011 buying a car? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 EDM Posted January 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2011 buying a car? Of course!!! Not me, though.....my friend.... Yay!!! It's right!!! Thanks all for trying.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Walking alone one day, looking for company
I see a sight that brings me to a stop
'She' was alone too; one among many
Her beauty took my breath away
I was told of her before
But no one could give her justice
Not even me; she was so lovely
Her soft voice...It was magic!
I took a step closer....and then I gasped...
My eyes now went to 'him' instead
He was perfect!
The way he moved! It was as if in a dream
His voice....It was almost bliss
I went straight and hugged him
And together he and I
Went away together...
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