dyalDragon Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 Oblivious to your plight, the world spins on it's axis; Throughout blood sweat and tears, and the most rigorous practice. They come one by one, claws flash at the wounds. Bear the pain, fight in silence, the end will come all too soon. A glimmer of hope...... but that light has gone out. Fear and frustration builds; sureness fades into doubt. As your last breath is drawn, see the predators' mad grins. Fallen form shoved aside, a new dance it begins. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 deannaart Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 a gladiator Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 dyalDragon Posted September 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 a gladiator and that's exactly what it was supposed to make you think of ... but not it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 plainglazed Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 Hey dD, got me spinning in different directions on this one ...along the lines of a critique or thesis defense a competition review like "Dancing with the Stars" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 (edited) Makes the think of a ballerina, a lion's kill, or a captive in a war....Great riddle... Edited September 11, 2009 by Juskiknback Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 dyalDragon Posted September 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 Hey dD, got me spinning in different directions on this one ...along the lines of a critique or thesis defense a competition review like "Dancing with the Stars" both very interesting directions... but not the right one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 dyalDragon Posted September 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 Makes the think of a ballerina, a lion's kill, or a captive in a war....Great riddle... not that either....and thank you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 dyalDragon Posted September 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 sort of like a ghost town around here... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 global warming, or quitting a habit.Could be be... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 and a stalker/murder Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 EDM Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 a vampire...???? like in twilight? I like the book, but not the movie.... P.S: love the riddle......and the dragon pic......... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Gmaster479 Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 rehab? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 dyalDragon Posted September 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 (edited) global warming, or quitting a habit.Could be be... and a stalker/murder hmmm... i could see where both of you are coming from, but not quite where you are going to end up not any of these though Edit: and it is definitely a metaphor Edited September 11, 2009 by dyalDragon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 dyalDragon Posted September 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 a vampire...???? like in twilight? I like the book, but not the movie.... P.S: love the riddle......and the dragon pic......... haven't read the book yet, but not a vampire although i wrote something in high school similar to this about a vampire and not that either Gmaster Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 life...birth to death Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 dyalDragon Posted September 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 life...birth to death not quite so deep... but nice guess Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 terminal illness Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Gmaster479 Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 surgery? Did you get shot? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 The big "C" cancer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 dyalDragon Posted September 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 hmmmm.... a little less physical and tangible maybe, and not quite so dramatic as it sounds... pretty commonplace now that i think about it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 reading a book or watching a movie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 dyalDragon Posted September 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 reading a book or watching a movie sounds like a good book.... but no Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 fighting the elementsmaybe.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 sounds like a good book.... but no That's the only kind I read - the good ones the work place? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 dyalDragon Posted September 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 nothing yet... although it could happen at work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0 Guest Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 (edited) temper-tantrum Edited September 11, 2009 by Juskiknback Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Oblivious to your plight,
the world spins on it's axis;
Throughout blood sweat and tears,
and the most rigorous practice.
They come one by one,
claws flash at the wounds.
Bear the pain, fight in silence,
the end will come all too soon.
A glimmer of hope......
but that light has gone out.
Fear and frustration builds;
sureness fades into doubt.
As your last breath is drawn,
see the predators' mad grins.
Fallen form shoved aside,
a new dance it begins.
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